PHOTO PROMPT © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Since time immemorial,
Rock sees Sea,
Silently, longingly,
Sea rocks Rock,
Violently, lovingly.
Countless embracements,
Each lasting just a tick,
Each separation
Painful as a prick.
During each little tryst,
As love-token,
Sea leaves behind
Part of herself,
Rock parts away
With flecks for his elf.
For time eternal,
These innumerable encounters,
Succeeding detachments,
Shall persist.
Till a day,
When in the moment,
Within it’s smallest fragment,
The last speck of Rock
Will walk away with Sea.
Their yearning since infinity,
Resultingly, leaves them for eternity,
Merged into one another,
Undistinguishable,
Inseparable,
RsOeCaK.
This is Amazing Sandeep. Beautiful, Passionate and restless as the relationship is, yet inevitably eternal, as all relationships ultimately are in one form or another.
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Nature, to me, is the means by which we expand the notion about the length of human relationships as well. It, may be the truth, but, is a mysterious one for me. However, two people in love may experience eternity for there is no thought about time in their intense moments, in that relationship. The closest that one may come to experiencing timelessness.
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And, yes, I felt nice seeing that comment coming for you for a post whose theme is love. Thank you.
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Another reply I just “found”. It gave me an opportunity to re-read this exquisite poem, though. Oh how I love the Gentle turbulence, the Lingering Solitude, the Longing of both that brings them together again and again until they become, at last, inseparable.
Tomorrow is #RomanticTuesday. May I Please reblog this on BnV?
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Can only be my privilege. Please go ahead :). I don’t know how words assemble themselves, if I take credit for them I would be wrong. Certain times certain feelings are beyond you and I am glad I get such chances to put the feelings in words that some may find extraordinary. 🙂
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Thank You Sandeep. 🙂
I do know what you mean, there are many times I write something that flows so easily from its source, it is Beyond my Comprehension.
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:):)..
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There are some lovely ideas in this
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Okay. And, they are ?
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The interpenetration of sea and rock – sea leaving part of herself in the rcok, rock walking away with the sea. Those images are clever
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Yey!! Sitting on that beach I have seen that, may be my mind made this up. :). But, I think being a little observant helps you write all this sometimes.
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This is a beautiful poem – liked it very very much and one that is worthy of many re-reads – thank you.
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You are free to read it as many times as you like Dahlia. I don’t know, how sometimes, words are woven. After, I finished writing it, and read it, the poem gave me a lovely feeling as well. :).
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Yes this one has a smooth natural easy flow and to it. Very well done
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A beautiful writing, portraying a deep passionate love shared by the sea and rock. Beautiful.
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Glad you could connect with the feeling. :). I feel nice when the words I somehow can bring together can transport beauty to you. Cheers.
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This is Beautiful! I saw it because Morgan shared it. I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Thank you.. I am glad you could connect with it so well to acknowledge it :). Morgan’s appreciation for good work has been inspirational!
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You are now in the authors page at poets corner.
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Okay. Thank you :).
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